Here is some writing I did
Modelling / Learning Focus / Success Criteria
Choose a picture that inspires you.
- Write a simple sentence that describes something about the picture.
- Add adjectives to the simple sentence, to add more detail.
- Add more language features like similes or metaphors to enhance the sentence.
- Use topic words directly related to the picture.
- Use emotive language to create/clarify mood.
1.One more challenge.
2.One more simple challenge.
3.One more simple challenge until I could leave this world back to my own.
4.One more simple challenge thanks to my sword until I could leave this world back to my own.
5. One more simple challenge thanks to my sword until I could leave this world back to my own once I slay this dragon with its scales.
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