Hi and welcome back to my blog! about writing and so here it is.
One morning in the holidays at my house my sister woke me up and keeped asking me if I wanted to go to the movies to go have some fun.
but this is just a part of it it's the part of it where we have to have a scenes of place and stuff like that well that's it for now see ya.
Thursday, August 2, 2018
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Hi Travis it’s Daniel from Wigram Primary School.
ReplyDeleteI like the way you set up the the start
Next time you should add more writing, try and write 6 sentences.
You remind me of going to the movies