Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when….
I use an opening statement that explains the subject of the report.
The opening statement is followed by sentences that describe the event; what you saw, what you did, how you felt, what you learnt.
Each paragraph focuses on a different aspect of the topic; travelling, the beach, the lagoon walk, playground.
A general statement about the topic usually rounds off the report.
The great playground
On Friday 2 weeks ago we went to Spencer park on the bus. I was sleeping cause I had a headache and for the first time ever the bus was quiet.
First we went to the park and played. There was a tire swing or something because it had tires that you sit on top of and then it spins around. There was also a climbing tower. It was pretty easy to climb. I played on a climbing tower one time with my sister and it was a lot more challenging. There were also 2 flying foxes.
I didn’t get go on the flying foxes because the lines were too long. After that we went to the lagoon. We went up to a lookout point to look at the lagoon because the grass was in the way. We saw lots of white spider nests and we were told that they were to protect the spiders for winter.
I tried to fall asleep on the bus on the way back, but it was too noisy. The playground at Spencer park is really and I’m glad that I learnt about spiders going into nests for the winter.
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